In my opinion, the song is very very listenable and it did not tire me at all... but it does seem like you used exactly the same notes on all synths.... only the cello-ish sound is doing the bass for it... other than that, the rest are synths doing the same notes...
It could use some more work, some more harmonies, maybe some synths to do different tunes in second voices for example... It could become awesome.
Cool, yeah I was a bit lazy with this one. I may try and edit it and upload a new version. :D Thanks for the review.
Even though it's repetitive, it's not tiresome at all, I find this minimalist and very very soothing... good job
imo the success of this song is the piano I did.
Well.. I was going to make a more complete review but adompeace said most of it already :)... Then again, this is a great track, but I've liked others better.
I think I understand the feeling, I've released tracks myself which I've really enjoyed making and got the feeling that something was acomplished, something new, something improved, kinda hard to explain, but my only guess is that sometimes this things can only be felt by the composer/producer himself or someone really really in touch with his work (or even his feelings), so I would get feedback like "yeah it's cool... but your track *title_here* is still my fav from you...", in the end the taste of the listener plays a bigger role for feedback :).
The piano intro lacks something, I am not sure what exactly, I find it too simplistic but that my have been your purpose. The synth was just great IMO, and I totally agree that this track deserved a more energetic climax :).
Yeah, you hit the nail on the head, man.
I think I made this song more for me than my listeners, I suppose. :p
Once I get situated again, I'll start looking at this song and see if I can improve it some.
Thanks a lot for this review. :D
Man, what sample package are you using for your strings?, I just loved them.
Thx fam. Sirhc7000 made the beat. check the author comments out, his user page is there. check him out.
=) thx for the rep. Stay up.
This peace engulfs me with very soothing, relaxing and also nostalgic moods... somehow it gets better with each listen O_o... It's just amazing. I salute you. :)
Newgrounds should have more of this stuff... not only those overrated fast paced techno/trance-ish songs...
Great Song, I wish I could come up with such fast solos. The chage at 7:20 = pwn. About the complex drums (well, not really), you could also use a better drums samples library to get rid of that "machine gun" (again) effect, seeing that you used those snares quite a bit.
At the beginning I felt like it was kinda week and monotonous... to my surprise I was utterly wrong... I find it just awesome how it builds up each time it comes back, totally unexpected. The only thing I did not like were those toms at 2:05 - 2:08 due to the "machine gun" effect. Now, if we could get all real instruments with real percussionists playing this track on stage = pwn. Cirque du Soleil anyone?
Amazing stuff... I wish most of the stuff that ppl call "trance" or "techno" (which usually have big scores) were just a bit closer towards this.... just amazing. Vocals are great, Melody is great, even the transitions are good. Great Work.
that's one of my favorite anime themes... pretty well used there...
thanks i take that extremely well sense its so old!!! chobits is awesome.
it sounds kinda like industrial to me... catchy tune, nice beat. Also... I find the fact that God gave you the inspiration to compose for a fight between humans and... machines from underground.... odd xD... Why were there machines in the center of the earth!?? xD
Quite original actually xD... nice summary, nice tune.
Genre changed, story update.... haha
Haha, so I got a little creative with the story. I could not help myself.
Thank you THANK YOU for the review. I extremely appreciate it!
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.